I trusted you
I gave myself to you
Never held back
Now im here broken and lost
That will teach me for letting you in
I will never let myself feel this way again
My door will be forever shut
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kevinwilson
Pro - 2007-06-30 @ 18:37:25
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- 2007-06-30 @ 21:32:12
guy problems?
Open all your doors. Can't let a little wussy get u down. After all this is life.
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Keep giving, then give some more.
Develop your strength, raise your vibration and you will attract someone wonderful.
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jillyflower653
- 2007-07-01 @ 19:49:24
This is a really powerful poem. Hope it's not too autobiographical - and you do have friends!
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TheBozzer
- 2007-07-01 @ 23:38:38
Patience, patience, it will all come good. And don't worry, all the famous poets got married eventually (well, Lord Byron sort of did, but you know what I mean).
The other thing is, blokes are boys, which is a bit of a problem when you're a sensitive young woman. If it's any consolation, half the time the boys have no idea what they are doing... -
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Oregano
Pro - http://foodfun.blog.co.uk
- 2007-07-05 @ 22:07:31
Many of us have known the first 5 lines...but the last two are wrong. We all have the ability to recover and bounce back.
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ianrthorpe
- 2007-07-11 @ 16:20:59
You will change your mind.
Learn to savour the heartbreak, it will give you many poems years down the line.
And from an old poet to a young one, remember the words of George Melly who you might never have heard of til he died last week having refused treatment for cancer.
"Its not how long your life lasts that matters, its what you do with it."
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- 2007-07-11 @ 19:00:45
Wow!
That is powerful stuff!
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sarahgroovy
- 2007-07-16 @ 15:15:33
ur poems r so powerfull in so few words i wish i could wright like that !!
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- 2007-07-20 @ 13:50:43
Sarah you might try learning to spell first you silly cow.
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sarahgroovy
- 2007-07-20 @ 13:59:41
god just 1 spelling mistake stop being a bitch !
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- 2007-07-19 @ 21:42:29
Cliched and contrite. Been said a thousand times. Expand your mind and do something original.
Having said that, its hard as it seems everything has been said before somewhere or by someone.
Hard to be original eh?
But then Shakespear, says things which have never been repeated, well at least not by him
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tobstv
- 2007-07-22 @ 00:44:10
I hope you get through this; yes it is painful, but unfortunately it is part of the growing process, much like acne & foot odour I'm afraid!
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mkfunky
- 2007-08-03 @ 18:39:59
Don't let a guy get you down like that. Fight back. Be a stronger person than ever before. Show him he made you a stronger person. Don't give him the honour of knowing he brought down such a brilliant soul.
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- http://lovesky.blogsky.com
- 2007-09-05 @ 20:14:48
hi ...
if you want leave my mind you have to be somewhat crazy .
comment me in http://lovesky.blogsky.com
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- http://lovesky.blogsky.com
- 2007-09-07 @ 09:50:44
your page added in my list
see my page : http://lovesky.blogsky.com
that's sad.
hope it's not true.
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